What do you think of this poem?

I didn't like it when I started reading it, but it really captured me in the second stanza. It sounds a lot like a Indie song, haha. I like it overall, but I'd only give it about a 6 or 7 . It's very predictable. I agree with the user above me. I'm tired of love poems and typical scenarios. I see a lot of potential in your writing and your last stanza is absolutely beautiful, but it would be better as a song rather than a poem. As a song, it's quite good. You have talent; I can hear it in your words. Keep practicing and good luck. I think with practice that you could be a rather good poet.